Nice job getting this posted on time. I especially enjoyed reading your thoughts on Kobe Bryant. He really was and still is, such an inspiration! This section of the unit is where you have shown me your writing skills. You have used full sentences, a range of sentence starters and topical vocabulary very well.
Next steps: I would hope to only see full sentences and paragraphs from here on out. No more bullet points please and make sure you always elaborate on your ideas. Remember that I should be able to take away the questions and still know what you are talking about in your answers.
Kia ora Rasheed!
ReplyDeleteNice job getting this posted on time. I especially enjoyed reading your thoughts on Kobe Bryant. He really was and still is, such an inspiration! This section of the unit is where you have shown me your writing skills. You have used full sentences, a range of sentence starters and topical vocabulary very well.
Next steps: I would hope to only see full sentences and paragraphs from here on out. No more bullet points please and make sure you always elaborate on your ideas. Remember that I should be able to take away the questions and still know what you are talking about in your answers.
Ka pai Rasheed!