This is a great piece of work I really like the way your thanking the docters. Maybe zoom your work in a little. Have you talked to a docter face to face before?
Its great to see you commenting on my work, and thank you for the positive comments.Also if you are wondering if I have talked to a docter face to face before. The answer to that is yes, I have.
This is a very good letter you have written. Its good to see all of your hard work paying off and I love the way that all your sentences were correct at the start of your letter. Why did you add 2 dears in the start? Toni
Thank you for the feedback, It means alot to me knowing that someone is looking at my work and enjoying it. Also the answer to your question is that there was a glitch in the system. For some odd reason when I posted it, It ended up like that.
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ReplyDeleteHello Rasheed
ReplyDeleteThis is a great piece of work I really like the way your thanking the docters. Maybe zoom your work in a little. Have you talked to a docter face to face before?
Talofa Lava Vai
DeleteIts great to see you commenting on my work, and thank you for the positive comments.Also if you are wondering if I have talked to a docter face to face before. The answer to that is yes, I have.
Rasheed
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Rasheed,
ReplyDeleteThis work is amazing and grammatically correct. This letter would really make a change for the better. Why is there two dears in the beginning?
Akoi
Hello rasheed
ReplyDeleteThis is a very good letter you have written. Its good to see all of your hard work paying off and I love the way that all your sentences were correct at the start of your letter. Why did you add 2 dears in the start?
Toni
Kia Ora Toni
DeleteThank you for the feedback, It means alot to me knowing that someone is looking at my work and enjoying it. Also the answer to your question is that there was a glitch in the system. For some odd reason when I posted it, It ended up like that.
Rasheed