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Wednesday, 14 September 2016

Naruto Uzamaki




Who is Naruto?
Naruto is a ninja with great skills and an amount of very strong power. He is bulky and he is fierce and crazy sometimes he has a lot of special features. One of the special features is he can transform into a strong demon fox called Nine tails and he saves the world with it. The best part is when he destroys the evil people who try to threaten the village.  The worst one is 10 tails. He does not have any weapons only his partner Sasuke.


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In his own time he plays around spray painting on a massive wall with the hokages the hokages are the protectors of the village with special powers that’s why Naruto has been training with kakashi. Kakashi. Kakashi was a hokage and Naruto’s dad was one to and when Naruto trains two other people join him there names are Sasuke Uchiha and Sakura haruno they are great ninja’s. Naruto can turn into a beast called nine tails chakra mode because his dad put it inside him.


It has been bad his parents have died from a man called Otsutuki toneri. Naruto has been beating up bad guys his whole life and he always win by 2 moves one is called rassengan and the other one is the nine tail chakra mode. transformation it makes a  Explosion he has great power just Does not know how to use it and when he fights his village sometimes explodes.


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Secondly,Naruto and his friends have been training for a very very long time naruto and sasuke can duplicate themselves into a hundred bodies but they're all fake.There clones you could say his power is sometimes taken away by evil winter soldiers they have possessed dark power.They can do tricky moves but when they do it is not light it is darkness and when there comes great power there is great responsibility.
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Lastly,when he was training he ran away and then there was a secret his father never died he was beside him the whole time watching naruto running.Sasuke was in trouble he was so angry he became a monster and destroyed the village.But not the whole village.It was a big battle between Naruto and Sasuke. Sasuke swung his sword at Naruto.Then Naruto got knocked out then Naruto lost and then Sakura came and calmed Sasuke down and that's the story of Naruto.


3 comments:

  1. Hi Rasheed it's me Jada and i would like to say great job on your Naruto Uzumaki story i am a Naruto fan myself but i just have to say that maybe you can make your writing a bit smaller and if so maybe you don't have to underline everything but other wise it looks pretty good, and i was wondering do you always underline your stories?

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    1. Thanks Jada for the Feed Back It helped me with my story so thank you, and Jada I don't always underline my stories, and sometimes I underline it but not always

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  2. Hi Rasheed, I really liked your story because It had lot's of information that interested me and I am also a Naruto fan too but I agree with Jada why do you underline your stories?

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