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Monday 28 December 2020

Jingles Bells - Remake

 Jingle Bells - Remake


Jingle Bells Jingle Bells

I ate all the cake

It was yum and it was fun

To eat it everyday hay!


Jingle Bells Jingle Bells

I ate all the cake

It was black and it was white

All sizes and shapes YAY!
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4 comments:

  1. Zana Yates-Walker29 December 2020 at 09:21

    Kia Ora Rasheed,

    My name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey.

    This activity was fun as you had to use your imagination to come up with lyrics for this classic christmas song.

    I really enjoyed reading your lyrics, they were short and sweet just like a cake! I noticed that you had some rhyming words in there like yum and fun, that is a great addition as it makes the song flow better.

    What flavour cake did you eat?

    Happy Holidays, Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.

    Ngā mihi nui,
    Zana Yates

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  2. Unknown29 December 2020 at 11:36

    Kia Ora Again Zana

    I am delighted to see that you are back looking at my blog comments. Its great to see you like my work. Also it's good to know after that 15 whole minutes of coming up with lyrics, I actually did it right.

    PS: I'm not good at writing songs, but I'm good at writing poems, and they were kind of similar to me. Glad you enjoyed.

    Ngā mihi nui
    Rasheed Bodija



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    1. Unknown29 December 2020 at 11:45

      Also I ate a rainbow cake. With white frosting and chocolate roses on top.

      Ngā mihi nui
      Rasheed Bodija


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    2. Zana Yates-Walker29 December 2020 at 13:42

      Hi Rasheed,
      You did do it right and you did it well, you should be proud of yourself! And yum rainbow cake is great but chocolate cake is definitely my favourite!!
      - Zana

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