Tena Koe Rasheed, Nice work and good job on completeing your work. You have proofread very well, good job. But maybe next time you should add some examples and pictures. I like the one when you said "Don't Show Hate" because thats common thing but maybe if we speak more about this, everyone will show the love and kindness. But there somes punctuations needed in one of your text boxes. Keep up the good work. -Ema From EHS Room Eleven
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Tena Koe Rasheed,
ReplyDeleteNice work and good job on completeing your work. You have proofread very well, good job. But maybe next time you should add some examples and pictures. I like the one when you said "Don't Show Hate" because thats common thing but maybe if we speak more about this, everyone will show the love and kindness. But there somes punctuations needed in one of your text boxes.
Keep up the good work.
-Ema From EHS Room Eleven
Kia Ora Ema
DeleteThank you for giving me this wonderful message. Thank you for pointing out my mistakes and helping me to fix my work. I am grateful for that and I also thank you for taking your time to make this wonderful comment.
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