Your Haiku poems are Awesome. I really enjoyed reading them one after the other, and the last one even rhymed and nicely wrapped it all up like these were three verses in one poem. There’s lots of great imagery here for people to enjoy and empathize with, that salt water smell, a chilling breeze and ice cream brain freeze.
Hey Rasheed,
ReplyDeleteYour Haiku poems are Awesome. I really enjoyed reading them one after the other, and the last one even rhymed and nicely wrapped it all up like these were three verses in one poem. There’s lots of great imagery here for people to enjoy and empathize with, that salt water smell, a chilling breeze and ice cream brain freeze.
Nice work Rasheed,
See you later in the comments.
Daniel